cs2001boy 2010-8-16 12:56
倚阙
[size=6][color=blue] [/color][/size][size=6][color=blue][b][size=3]七月鹊桥西,[/size][/b][/color][/size]
[b][size=3][color=blue] 东向巧笑期,[/color]
[color=#0000ff] 此日非垂泪,[/color]
[color=#0000ff] 旦与卿共嬉![/color]
[color=#0000ff] 尝问相思起,[/color]
[color=#0000ff] 故老唏无意?[/color]
[color=#0000ff] 咫为银河际,[/color]
[color=#0000ff] 拾步影相依……[/color]
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[color=#0000ff]值此佳节,心生感念,思远方佳人,作此诗,同祝各位斑竹及狼友们七夕各取所栖~呵呵[/color][/size][/b]
[[i] 本帖最后由 cs2001boy 于 2010-8-16 13:05 编辑 [/i]]
szsgjbg 2010-8-16 15:14
这诗写得从容不迫,节奏明快,心情愉快:excellence